This is a strong, unsettling piece—and it works because it stays grounded in something real: grief, guilt, and how easily a child can be manipulated when adults cross boundaries.
A few things stand out immediately:
1. The emotional core is solid.
The tension doesn’t come from anything supernatural—it comes from a very human fear: someone using your dead child’s memory to reach your living one. That’s far more disturbing than a ghost story, and you handled that restraint well.
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